Comments on: sighs along the north fork (oh, shenandoah) http://arspoetica.wordpress.com/2008/12/03/sighs-along-the-north-fork-oh-shenandoah/ because while some truths lend themselves to equations, others are best described in verse Mon, 16 Nov 2009 18:18:23 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: maynard joe http://arspoetica.wordpress.com/2008/12/03/sighs-along-the-north-fork-oh-shenandoah/#comment-211 maynard joe Wed, 17 Dec 2008 07:58:36 +0000 http://arspoetica.wordpress.com/?p=494#comment-211 hi. i really dug your poem. but moreso on a technical note, although the "snow" you have falling down on your site at the moment is definitely a cool effect, it's rather distracting and made it very difficult to fully groove on your writing (concentration-wise... and it definitely had an effect on the rhythm because i kept on getting pulled away by the "snow"). kind of like watching a good movie with some other music going on in the backround. then again, i've never been here to your site, and this may only be a temporary whim. anyways, i suck though.... but yet humbly suggest that your "snow" takes away from fully enjoying your good writing and maybe that it should be removed. kudos though regardless of my technical criticism, good poem. <strong> maynard, glad you liked the poem, and i appreciate your inputs. i reluctantly agree that the snow is distracting, “reluctantly” because you’re right in that it is a temporary whim, me indulging my nostalgia and adolescent-like attraction to the latest cool effects…that being said, i’m going to leave it for now since, well, ’tis the season, but it is definitely <em>not</em> a permanent fixture here. thanks again for stopping by; hope you’ll be back when the weather clears :) --jsl</strong> hi. i really dug your poem. but moreso on a technical note, although the “snow” you have falling down on your site at the moment is definitely a cool effect, it’s rather distracting and made it very difficult to fully groove on your writing (concentration-wise… and it definitely had an effect on the rhythm because i kept on getting pulled away by the “snow”). kind of like watching a good movie with some other music going on in the backround. then again, i’ve never been here to your site, and this may only be a temporary whim. anyways, i suck though…. but yet humbly suggest that your “snow” takes away from fully enjoying your good writing and maybe that it should be removed. kudos though regardless of my technical criticism, good poem.


maynard,
glad you liked the poem, and i appreciate your inputs. i reluctantly agree that the snow is distracting, “reluctantly” because you’re right in that it is a temporary whim, me indulging my nostalgia and adolescent-like attraction to the latest cool effects…that being said, i’m going to leave it for now since, well, ’tis the season, but it is definitely not a permanent fixture here.
thanks again for stopping by; hope you’ll be back when the weather clears :)
–jsl

]]> By: Joy http://arspoetica.wordpress.com/2008/12/03/sighs-along-the-north-fork-oh-shenandoah/#comment-208 Joy Thu, 04 Dec 2008 15:10:41 +0000 http://arspoetica.wordpress.com/?p=494#comment-208 beautiful narrative, smooth as the river beautiful narrative, smooth as the river

]]> By: Bindo http://arspoetica.wordpress.com/2008/12/03/sighs-along-the-north-fork-oh-shenandoah/#comment-207 Bindo Wed, 03 Dec 2008 23:45:49 +0000 http://arspoetica.wordpress.com/?p=494#comment-207 Again you impress the hell out of me. A sincere thanks for your words Bindo Again you impress the hell out of me.
A sincere thanks for your words

Bindo

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